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Referencing conventions: representing ideas of others

The two main referencing systems used in the Faculty of Education are the American Psychologists Association (APA) conventions and the system known as the Harvard conventions.

Some useful websites to help you understand the rules of referencing using these conventions:

• In-text referencing - a very easy-to-use site
• Citing and referencing: how to acknowledge your sources - Monash University Library website
• EndNote - a wonderful software program to help you manage your referencing (Monash University Library website)

Writing about the ideas of others

The following sections look at issues of referencing that affect the ways in which your attitudes to the ideas you are writing about become apparent to your readers.  Believe it or not, your 'tone of voice' in what you write is shaped by such apparently small matters as your choice of reporting verb (verbs of attribution), decision to refer directly to an author's name as part of your sentence rather than just including it in brackets later, or even your choice to use the past or present tense.

The section includes:

• Referring to others
• Verbs of attribution: words for the brain-weary
• Attribution and critical analysis
• Verb tense, attribution and authorial stance
• A sample assignment exemplifying referencing

Referring to others

(Information prominent and author-prominent references)

Swales (1990, pp.149& 153) shows how you can decide whether to focus on the source of an idea or on the idea itself in your writing. He provides two categories of referencing: author prominent, where the author's name appears in your sentence, or information prominent, where the author's name appears only in brackets.  An adaptation of his examples follows.

Source: Swales, J. (1990).  Genre analysis: English in academic and research settings.  Cambridge:  Cambridge University Press. pp 149 and 153

Verbs of attribution: words for the brain-weary

Below are some verbs and their synonyms for you to draw on when you want to talk about someone else's ideas or words - a thesaurus of verbs of attribution just for you.

An argument can be:     

• founded on
• based on
• grounded in    a theory/view/set of data
• embedded in
• underpinned by

Note that the above words are value-laden. Your choice of word will reveal to your reader your stance toward the author you are reporting on.  It will show whether or not you consider her claims to be substantiated.

Another look at verbs used in critical analysis

Arnaudet & Barrett (1984, P.153-5) provide a useful resource on verbs of attribution reproduced in the box below

Neutral verbs of restatement

Verbs of restatement with a + or - connotation

Verbs of opinion   

This category is used to report the content of another writer's opinion (or conclusion or suggestions).

Positive opinions:

Reporting opinion (usually neutrally)

Verbs of uncertainty   

This category is used to report the content of another writer's expression of doubt or uncertainty.

1. McClelland has observed  that affiliative managers spend too much time on the telephone.               (present, appraise, argue)
2. McClelland appraises us of the fact the affliliative managers spend too much time on the telephone.
3. McClelland describes the rationale for the training program which he conducts for managers.  (point out, mistrust, present)
4. McClelland doubts the validity of the conclusions of Chris Argyris.  (wonder, remind, claim)
5. McClelland remarks that power has been given a bad image by social scientists.  (set forth, report,    assert)
6. McClelland maintains that employees respond better to a well-defined authority system. (suspect, claim, support)
7. McClelland argues that managers must understand the positive side of power.  (point out, dispute, express)
8. McClelland recommends that managers attend a training course to make them aware of power. (describe, challenge, urge)
9. McClelland dismisses the work of McGregor, Maslow, Argyris and others.  (observe, speak, disagree)
10. McClelland reminds the reader of the evidence that has shown that high morale results from a well-defined authority system.  (question, determine, speak)
11. McClelland thinks  that democratic management is so ineffective that companies which use it go out of business.  (assert, present, doubt)
12. McClelland believes that the institution is more important than the individuals who compose it.  (support, report, wonder)

Source: Arnaudet, M.L. & Barrett, M.E. (1984).  Approaches to academic reading and writing.  Englewood Cliffs, NJ: Prentice Hall Regents.pp 153-5

Attribution and critical analysis

The following paragraph is an excerpt from an essay on approaches to intercultural education.  Notice the words that indicate what the writer thinks about the ideas of the other writer's she mentions.  How does she use particular verbs of attribution to convey a particular attitude to the work of the writers she refers to?  What words or phrases signal her own ideas? 

Ballard and Clanchy (1991) propose a continuum of attitudes to knowledge and specify learning approaches and strategies that correspond to these attitudes.  Drawing mainly on anecdotal evidence, they suggest that their three learning approaches, namely the "reproductive", "analytical" and "speculative" approaches, are characteristic of certain stages of schooling (in Australia) or of certain cultures (Ballard and Clanchy, 1991, p.11).  In their consideration of learning strategies, however, they have presented only a limited understanding of the ways in which the strategies assist learning.  For example, they see memorisation as a way of retaining "unreconstructed" (p.11) knowledge.  In contrast, the work of Biggs (1996) demonstrates that memorisation serves the purpose of retaining ideas so that they can be considered and understood.

Verb tense, attribution and authorial stance

Verb tense in academic writing may exercise a greater influence on your reader's interpretation of your text than you bargained for.  Past tense can give more than a time perspective; it can distance the reader from the ideas being expressed.  Present tense is often used to make generalisations - you need to be sure you wanted readers to feel this was a generalisable point.  Below is a simplified description of the uses and possible effects of tense on the meaning made.

The tense you select for your verbs in your essay, report or literature review reveals a great deal more to your reader than the time frame.  It tells your reader whose idea is being proffered (yours or someone else's, something about your attitude towards the ideas you are reporting if you have attributed them to a researcher or theorist, and indicates how general or specific the point is.  In brief - and note that this is a simplified description of the use of tense - the three tenses which appear most frequently are used in the following ways:

• The present tense is used for: generalisation (in overviews, statements of main points); a statement which is generally applicable or which seems relevant; a statement made by you as writer; or to report the position of a theorist/ researcher to which you feel some proximity, either in time or allegiance (eg. Piaget (1969) outlines the stages..).
• The past tense is used to 'claim non-generality about past literature' (Ostler, 1981, cited in Swales, 1990, p.152); that is, it is used to report or describe the content, findings or conclusions of past research.  The specificity of the study is thus emphasised.
• The present perfect is used to indicate that inquiry into the specified area continues, to generalise about past literature, or to present a view using a non-integral form of referencing (the name of the author does not appear in the text of the sentence; it appears only in the subsequent parentheses).
• The future tense is often used in the methodology section in a proposal to state intention.  When you are describing what appears in your writing, use the present tense, not the future (it is not your intention, since you've already done it): eg, "The sections below describe the process of .", not, "the sections below will describe the process of ."

Consider the excerpt from the previous section.  What subtle difference in message might you receive as a reader if it were written as follows?

Ballard and Clanchy (1991) proposed a continuum of attitudes to knowledge and specified learning approaches and strategies that corresponded to these attitudes.  Drawing mainly on anecdotal evidence, they suggested that their three learning approaches, namely the "reproductive", "analytical" and "speculative" approaches, were characteristic of certain stages of schooling (in Australia) or of certain cultures (Ballard and Clanchy, 1991, p.11).  In their consideration of learning strategies, however, they presented only a limited understanding of the ways in which the strategies assist learning.  For example, they saw memorisation as a way of retaining "unreconstructed" (p.11) knowledge.  In contrast, the work of Biggs (1996) demonstrates that memorisation serves the purpose of retaining ideas so that they can be considered and understood.

A sample assignment exemplifying referencing

The sample of a brief research report included below is used to highlight and comment on some of the main things you need to know about referencing. In addition, it permits some comments on style, particularly issues to do with revealing your own position.

Please note that this report uses the Harvard system of referencing. It follows an AUTHOR DATE:PAGE format.

The report has many endnotes (marked by a small Roman numeral in the report, with a corresponding comment on the last page). We do not normally use endnotes in academic writing in the Faculty. They are in this text simply to make a point about referencing or style. All the points highlighted by a shaded section are points about referencing. All the underlined parts are about style. You may wish to print off the last page of the report so that you can read the paper with the endnotes at hand.